She dances, a lingering heartbeat.
An echo of forever,
stayed by his touch
in this timeless moment
where tomorrow never comes
and yesterday never was.
Shadows backdrop, mirror images
of whoever she wishes to be,
a dreamer of wonders
untold by lips,
held in hands like china tears
fragile songs.
Rising on emotion, soaring into
the oblivion of right now
he watches her soul take flight
revelling with the stars,
laughing, a promise of eternity.
Author notes
Beautiful Picture 
Image artist is the incredible Katerina Sokolova
75 words
written to Vannessa Mae's "Happy Valley"
Don't know if this qualifies as sensual...but I like it
A contest entry
- Quickie...shall we make this for MATURE audiences? 10 spots-a 1000 points!!!! hurry up. Prompt is posted. by JinSays.
1000 points, ended September 7, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BATTLE OF THE GOLDS THREE by Swan song.
2000 points, ended October 5, 60 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Feel free to be as critical (or not) as you like...
Comments
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This is very very lovely thank you so much for entering
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Beautiful and very well done. So sensual and subtle I feel you managed just the right balance.
Excellent. You inspire.
Well deserved gold.
Garrison
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Beautiful, ansd quietly sensual. Congrats on the Gold.
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No No No, this is quite charming, and sensual in it's own lovely way. I don't like being bludgeoned to death with obvious or smutty, and the innuendo here is not only welcome, it's appreciated.
There are too many things to highlight that I liked about you entry, so I'll just say thank you.
Blessings, and best wishes,
Jin
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