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Perhaps

 Perhaps,

 

In some soft scented holy place,

 

Where tall pines taper into space,

 

The song of the wind is whispering,

 

Gently whispering through the fir,

 

And the tall tree stands silent listening,

 

To what some cannot hear...

 

 

Perhaps the yearning on my uptruned face,

 

Had caught a glimpse of things  afar,

 

In some secret holy place,

 

While wishing on a star,

 

Perhaps a message whispered by a wind,

 

 That cannot be voiced with pen-

 

 

And perhaps the relics of my art,

 

Had know the message by heart...

 

Perhaps,

 

Just perhaps...

 

 

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  • evelynxxoo
    October 21
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    i fell inlove with this instantly so calming to my soul a beautiful write very refreshing indeed

  • Bob Fox
    October 8

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    Perhaps

    And perhaps this is just one absolutely beautiful piece of poetry. I think the Anunnaki are smiling now.


  • poetryality silver member
    September 8

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    "Perhaps" is such a soft undefined word. The message in this poem seems more for the positive than the negative. The resonance in this poetry is stunning, as are the words. There is an air of stability written here, and the nuance of knowing...

    Excellent work my sister. I hope you are well and smiling with the sun as it blazes new paths filled with desire and hope.

    Very soft and sensual are these words.


    Much Love Always ♥

    Renee


  • myrataal silver member
    September 8

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    Oh Yes!

    You did hear things ancient and from afar! You heard my beloved pine trees sing on Glenheath, the holy ground of my grandparents, at Ruiterbosch, district Mossel Bay, South Africa.

    There you have it. Beautiful poetry.

    See?
    Love to you precious Poetess!
    Myra


    • Jalalbad gold member
      September 8
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      thank you for such a remarkable comment.
      Your comments always uplift my spirit, and yes I do see! I have heard the voice of the wind whispering through tall old pines.
      It was a soothing experience and one I will never forget. I cannot remember all the words I heard but I know it was a message from God- He was telling me many things, yet only one thing stands out in my mind-He said ''never to fear.''
      Love to you precious myrataal.

  • moon2u gold member
    September 7

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    Hello Jally!

    I am happy to see you are still here and I see big changes in your writing...I find your genre much more spiritual since I have returned. Thankyou for the visit. I really like this piece, there is much hope and wishes for better tomorrow's, it is peaceful and loving. Ty for the visit.
    hugs Moont

  • Humm..by the sacred penning you worded the invisible joy around this page of wonderful poetry by you..a great description you did here..


  • left
    September 6

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    Hoping for miraculous and compassionate things is perhaps a way of communicating with great spirits in higher realms. Praying is often egotistic, greed ridden interfering with the divine plan (the late George Carlin), but hoping from intuitive goodness is envisioning better worlds for all, especially those trampled on who have our undivided sympathy. The human race has failed to combat the dark forces and traded its honesty for a little comfort at the expense of the less fortunate in this fragmented world. It will end soon and perhaps we will see some of our true hopes come true. Thank you, precious soul for creating and sharing. I commend your vision and artistic skill. Take care,

    Chris


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    September 6

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    Very true Earth is a Holy place
    good imagery
    Nicely done Judy

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