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salacious

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i take the stem
and snap it
to hear her laugh

leather straps
chain maleness
to the floor

this dying petal
plucked
feed my labial 
insufficiency
against his trembled jaw

before she demands
the lips
takes flesh
makes me beg
for more




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Pic:Katerina Sokolova

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  • JinSays gold member
    September 7

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    ohmy!

    Can I just say, uh wow?
    Damn, the maleness chained to the floor, wooohoooo...how can I NOT LOVE THAT?

    And yeah, I think I would recommend the same label to be installed on your writes, as your partner in crime. . . .and only allow for small, tasty little bits to be dispensed carefully.
    Fantastic entry, thank you again,

    jin


  • markgrif gold member
    September 7
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    Very nice poem. hehe

    I like the pic. She looks defeated to me.


  • sheltered
    September 7

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    Hi, how are you ladies...
    Can I come alang?

    "trembled jaw" Damn fine.

    Hot stuff.


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    September 6
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    Hot!

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