Dear Mister Fantasy,
Take away all my pain, self-imposed or otherwise.
Make me swallow bottled pleasure again and again; only to regret that will come afterwards.
Make my heart hollow, my mind ablaze with lust, my limbs free, my loins open.
Make me do what I'd swore only in my innermost dreams.
Let me be the talk springing from the lips of every one who sees me.
That women may envy and men may desire.
Enslaved by my beauty and wit, among other things.
Make them see me the way I see myself in ardent vision - chocolate ice cream dipped in fudge syrup.
Rich, softly molded, melting to the heat of touch.
My sweetness thick and mellow, lingering on the back of the tongue just before going down. And like ice cream on a summer day, he'll work harder to prevent my juices from escaping him. And he'll relish that labor, deeming it his favorite for it is the most rewarding.
Dear Mr. Fantasy,
I drink to you. As well to all my fevers, desires, rash decisions and impulsive judgements. They drink to you as well. For my desires and I are nothing without each other - and we are nothing without you.
Author notes
Title of course from song by Steve Winwood, Traffic. Regardless of what the song may actually mean, this is simply my own interpretation.
Please tell me what you think
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Damn...
Wow... just wow... That was nice, awesome, good, great... It was just... wow... My God that made me speechless. I only read and I'm already envy you. Great job. I love it, love it, love it. Keep writing. -
Humm..you made me to think with the immages and the format of this curious poetry..though quite interesting and quite impressive as well..I am really surprised the various turns and the immages knitted one by one by the wonderfudl poet..I love it though..thanks for sharing ...
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I think everyone likes to indulge in thoughts like these. I enjoyed the read!
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You don't have to state that the title is borrowed from someone else, titles aren't owned, anyone can use it freely even when the idea is taken from someone. Removing the (title borrowed) will enhance the readers love of your poetry. You've written a very nice poem here. I enjoyed reading this.
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