Years two i spent with her,
My first and my only love.
Years gone by since separated,
though images still alive.
Days coloured like rainbow,
flew past without notice.
Days dripping with sweetness,
finished leaving no taste.
Sweet fragrance of her lingers,
a silent part of my heart treasures.
Sweet moments lay buried,
threatening to burst out.
Touches of soft feather,
remind her gentle hands,
Touches of soft silk,
kindle my passion for her.
Pain could never kill,
only mutilate my heart.
Pain never stood a chance,
My love still remains.
Living without her is easy,
for living to cherish those beautiful days.
Living to relive moments,
of fond remembrances and first love.
Author notes
My expressions on short poem..hope you like it.
A contest entry
- 4 Options: First Love, Darkness addict, Rain, or your Almost Lover by Rain-Shot-Rose.
600 points, ended September 7, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Woud like comments on the style
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
Years two i spent with her,
My first and my only love.
Years gone by since separated,
though images still alive
this Paragraph is too good.. actually it is true
dam good GIRISH -
"Days coloured like rainbow,
flew past without notice.
Days dripping with sweetness,
finished leaving no taste."
&&
"Pain could never kill,
only mutilate my heart."
Are my favorite stanzas/lines.
I can definitely relate to this poem a lot.
You should have won gold in that contest :]
♥
-Rainbow. -
-
thank you for your comment
Hi Rainbowgasm, thanks for liking my lines.Happy to see someone relating to my emotions..
-
-
wow this was beautiful...i felt like i was walking in slow motion...almost in a dream full of passion and pain. i loved your piece. good luck in my contest! and thanks for entering!
-
-
Thank you
Nice to hear you liked it...
-
-
Yes I like it..because it is honestly stated..purely described..and beautifully narrated my friend..thanks for sharing it..
-
-
Thank you for your comment!
Its been my pleasure in writing..thank you for liking it
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
