I miss you so my love and I don't know why...
I really just can't stand another good-bye.
How I so miss you and I don't know what to do...
Without you I don't know what I'll be getting into.
Everyone is calling me a lunatic...
All this my state of mind is starting to reflect.
Oh your love is so divine!..
I need you to be only mine!
You really need to comeback soon...
Before the stars sets over the moon.
Every now and then I secretly think...
Your love for me is starting to shrink.
I love you so much so I need to think straight...
No matter how long I simply have to wait.
It's the very destiny that sends me to the end...
As I'm the only one that this true love can defend.
Every time the day starts off new...
I know my path will be crossed again with you!
There are love's that are so divine!..
All I ask for is just a small sign!
I have faith that you'll come back!..
You still love me no matter what I lack!
The pain hits very hard!..
But I keep myself on guard!
All I do in this life is suffer....
Cause like your love there is no other!
I want to have, love and kiss you forever...
Until now to whenever and whatever!
It's a love that's so divine!..
I know you will return in time!
Everyone tries to hold out... Even when there is nothing to hold on too.
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Good Lord! This is probably the best I've read of your work so far and trust me when I tell you, they are all so good. But this one. Wow, this one just touched me and took my breath away. Perhaps that is because, I feel the same way right now. But that's besides the point. Haha. Beautiful, and filled with intense emotions. Lovely wordings, an amazing write and read.
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Awesome, simply awesome!
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Breath Taking
This was just breath taking. I was moved when i read it. You are still the Amazing Writer I Know.
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Glad to hear dear!
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beautiful work i love it i under stand how yu feel i have felt it before loved the write keep it up...
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Thank you little dear!
Love you too!
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I cannot hide behind the words of brilliance
You have spoken true beauty here
Defining loves truest devinity
It's hard to live without that special someone
And even worse - hard to live alone
I understand this piece all to well
Loved every second!!!!!
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TT
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You'll be amazed of my skills in the line of poetry dear..!
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Indeed they do... Great poem, as always... Truly this is what happens to many of us. It always hurts. Love isn't a breeze.
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Thanks!
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Ohh divine love!
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful! I can feel all the emotions through each word.
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Thanks for the read and comment sunshine!
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Indeed we are.
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Thank you for writing this! its EXACTLY the situation im in, and it hurts a lot to be away from the most amazing love in the world but you just know you'll be together again soon enough because the love is too strong to just die away from. every now and then you feel the end of it all, but then again theres no way that can happen
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Maybe other of my poems will remind you of other situations..! Thanks for the read dear!
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This poem is freaking sweeeeeeet!
Nice job hun
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I'm with you on that one little dear of mines!
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