What lonely cadaver is this,
Haunting my precious, stagnant pond?
"Take it away," I say.
A contest entry
- Quickie PIF by February Moon.
300 points, ended September 7, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Feel free to be as critical (or not) as you like...
Comments
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Nicely ended.


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Nice ending.
Begone, O' waterlogged bones! lol

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i like this, itis unique and makes you thin, good luck and take care

Stephanie ♥



