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falling

I felt your lips
I brushed your hair
Can you not see,
This feels like a scare
Or a big massive tare
And it’s all down to me…

I held your hand
I felt your heart
Can you not see,
It feels like a dart
Right through my heart
And it’s all down to me…

I held your body close to mine
I was able to have a good time
And you were able to make me laugh
Can you not see,
I feel like I’ve been cut in half
And its all down to me…

If I didn’t do what I done
Maybe I would have stayed as one,
When your went out of my live,
Straight away I grabbed the knife
Pain went from head to toe
Straight to the ground I go.
Blood on the floor, all over my shoe
All I know is that I loved you!

this is how it felt when i lost the guy that i loved last year.

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  • Glenn
    September 15
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    Good

    Nice poem


  • NyteWalkur
    September 8
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    Forgot applause lol


  • NyteWalkur
    September 8
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    I know how u feel, i lost the person i love too. it really hurts too have sum1 u care about so deeply decide ur not worthy of them anymore. but ur better than them and u will recover. my friend once said to me "sometimes u must let go of all memory, good and bad, in order to move in. its not easy, but i can tell by the intensity of ur write tht u have the power :-)