I was the bashful girl,
caught up in her work,
and you were sweet but rowdy boy
who some labled as a jerk.
As the days went by
I tried to keep my cool,
for your handsome ogling
was distracting me from school.
The clever english teacher
that I was going to be
definitely was not what
you had in store for me.
Love is all you think about,
as I read and write.
You ponder what it feels like
to hold me in the dead of night.
Secretly I have the desire
of loving you as well.
Sometimes I feel terrible,
for I feel I have made your life hell
For not noticing you;
your eyes, your hair, and
dare I say, your ass.
I just simply smile,
while my thoughts travel back to class.
Author notes
bits and pieces of this are true. he stares at me in class, and i am perfectly smart, but we joke around all the time! it's awesome!=)
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Cute write! congratulations on the gold. The last three lines are adorable and very visual. Thank you for entering
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nice poem. sounds like me looking at my bestest buddie (who i love to death and have known scince before preschool) during the classes we have together. we joke around all the time too! lol =)
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nice poem. liked the rhyme in it and the flow was really gud. (note: anyone who can rhyme is awesome to me cuz i can't. lol )
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Cute.
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did you just use the a-word?
"eyes pop out"
hey you remind me being thirteen is so much fun. i wish you more silent gazes from "the jerk" lol
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