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When?

And when did you care,

Whether I live or die?

When did you care,

If I scream my lie?

--I love you--

Perhaps you sense it's not true.

--I hate you--

I don't want to believe it.

--I'm finished--

I've nothing to live for.

--you've done it--

And I breathe no more.

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..take also as you will...

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  • momwitzman
    October 2

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    you can work on....

    Loving yourself for who you are, not because of him! You are awesome. I wish I could make you see that you really are someone, someone who's loved without him.