A morose testment
to what I have endured.
The endless lies,
and the addition of the ages.
A sonnet to the dead,
the song that laments it's pain.
--I sing this song--
My lamentation emants my expressions.
it solidifies my sadness,
it endorses my pain.
And in the end, it is true...
--I don't want to be this--
I don't want to feel this pain.
I don't want to watch death.
i don't want to feel this anymore.
i want death to be an escape.
--but I can't--
Death eludes my grasp,
Death escapes me.
i want to be more than this testement,
the truth within the lie.
--I hate that I've killed--
I hate that I have murdered.
I never meant to end them.
I never meant to kill them,
I just needed sustenence.
--My remorse--
I lament my pain.
I lament my remorse.
And perhaps the cattle shall see,
I am not the monster
that I seem.
Author notes
Well...here is a poem that seemed to go on it's own. I seem to be following it, but I have no idea where it leads. Your guess is as good as mine. So...take it as you will.
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A contest entry
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What do you think? Anything I can work on?
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Wow, beautiful way of putting how a vampire feels when living forever. I enjoyed this poem greatly...you did well on this...
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wow dude this is amazing, i love the end, its soooo good. good job and good luc
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I lament my pain.
I lament my remorse.
And perhaps the cattle shall see,
I am not the monster
that I seem.
GREAT!
I love it!
Thank you so much! -
ah yes, i have those feelings sometimes....very nicely written
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this is really good. i could feel the vampires pain. wonderfully done!
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