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trees.....

As I stop and watch.
I can see you all sway.
I marvel in the way your colors look in the setting sun.
the comforting sight of you...
My mind races as the images flicker in my head.
Of all the possible ways to describe such beauty.
the way the arch seems to be....
Like a mother cradling her young.
The way you calm senses....
Like a fathers soothing voice.
These are only a few that I can put into words.
As my breathe is stolen by the ways of God.

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whispering in your ear

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  • poetryality silver member
    September 8

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    This is a very pleasant work of poetry, pleasing to the eye, and senses. You make it possible for us to see the photograph without it being present. Excellent! I wish you well in the challenge.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • Samplette gold member
    September 8

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    A very nice write. Great message. Not liking the lower case singular "i", but I do like the piece. Thank you for entering.
    Sam