Congratulations are in order
On this special occassion
Now is the time to enjoy this accomplishment
Great things await you in the future
Ready yourself for many tests, it won't be easy
Always sure to use the word of god to uplift
Teach those lost souls that they are loved
Understand some may not respond right away
Live your new role in honor of the most high
Accept the challenges with a compassionate heart
Troubled youth will surely need you
Intelligent woman, I wish you well
Oh,the Lord I pray will keep you safe
Never allow this hardened world to bring you down
Sure,this is your day ... and on it?
Total success is what I pray.
Author notes
Swangrnv
My friend, not sure if this is what you were looking for.. it's an acrostic, I hope it's ok.
A contest entry
- Dedication To My Mother (Ordainment) by hotchocolate.
1400 points, ended September 17, 11 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you so much it was a pleasure reading this write
God Bless!
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thank u
I appreciate the time u spent to read and comment on my work.
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What a sincere write.
The flow of the acrostic is smooth - in fact I did not 'see' it. Be blessed. Frans
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Don't forget to put your name at the bottom of your write Thanks
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Beautiful poem
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This is a really nice and genuine acrostic, and a wonderful dedication to this woman. Great job on this poem, and I wish you all the best in the contest. Blessings, Patty
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Thank you!
Bless you dear friend, I truly thank you for your support
and very kind words!
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This is Beautifully and Sweetly written
You manage to pull some great stuff outta that head of yours when you are entering a contest.. I mean most of it is great, but your contest stuff is just the greatest! It seems to me like you should enter a lot more contests lol. Just kidding.
Seriously, this piece was a very beautiful dedication. I am certain that this will be greatly appreciated. Smooth and sweet and of course that warm spiritual splash helps a lot! How wonderful, Swan-san! Bravo dear friend!
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Thanks!
You sure know how to swell my ego lady! l.o.l. thanks so much I know your comment are pure and straight from the heart so they really mean alot to me! Now tell me more about my eyes..l.o.l.
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This is so nice and nicely done and my mom will enjoy reading this! Thank you for your entry
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Thanks!
I'm happy you approve, I wasn't sure where to go with this but I wanted your mom to know at, that I realize what a big deal this is and that I am happy for her, and for you.
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