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Rumpled

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such kind conversation
crawls between
the dirty sheets

for beds we made
and slept little in

the floor was kinder

a bed of boughs

pine needles strafing
taut skin
waiting

for one of us to give it away





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jpg = painting by clairmont 1975

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  • Elisabeth Strange
    September 9
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    So beautiful, loving and soft!


  • Cannonsfire gold member
    September 7

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    This has such a sadness in it,like two people facing away from each other still waiting for one to turn. I know this feeling oh so well.


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 7

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    Lovely & thoughtful, my Friend.
    Just like you.