I looked in the Mirror
But i didn't see my face
I saw a faithless disgrace
A spirit misplaced
eyes without hope
drugged and doped
lifeless, priceless
an animated shell
An angel in hell,
without a soul to sell.
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Take a look in the mirror
A contest entry
- because i feel like it.... (options) by DemonSpit.
1300 points, ended November 2, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Don't know it i'm finished with this one yet.
Comments
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ive felt this way so many times before and never been able to find words for these emotions
you did it perfectly
it even rhymes
wow, i love it -
doesn't matter if you are finished or not...it's still good, really good...the theme of mirrors is something I like...alot.
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