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Derelict Adolescence




Metallic words gain no luster
upon your putrid lips.

But daggers graze my silkweed skin
petrifying the livid phrase "Love, Hope, Live".

As it is to be eternally borne
to memorialize this day.

So I will evoke,
every abysmal year,
the fidelity that you stole away.





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  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    September 8

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    But daggers graze my silkweed skin
    petrifying the livid phrase "Love, Hope, Live".


    i just like this really alot..... thank you for entering it in contest and best of luck to you......!

  • KayJay silver member
    September 7

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    Darkly done... in keeping with the prompt. I love the feelings you evoke with your words... the bitterness which explain the mutilation and the memories... very well done! Best of luck...
    Ken