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Not The Same (as before)

I'd run with my heart
sewn on my sleeve
so everyone could see
for them, I'd never leave

But I'm not the same anymore
this heart broke off
and hit the floor
cos' I'm not the same, as before

I'd sing to those songs
the ones we all know
to make you feel better
in love, I did show

But I'm not the same anymore
dreams of you dont haunt me
cos' I'm not the same anymore
even if you can't see

I travelled a distance
to find myself
or who I used to be
instead I found, hidden in the dark
a brand new me

I will not run, with my heart on my sleeve
or promise a friend "I'll never leave"
I will not give my love to one,
who simply doesn't want it

I'm not the same anymore
I'm stronger, more secure
I'm sexy, smart and not afraid
I'm not the same anymore
not the same, as I was before

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  • the perfect fake
    September 30
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    This is your song


  • Pisces Pieces
    September 8

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    Absolutely wonderful, in every aspect! Actually, it's lyrical!

    The story of a lesson learned...you get knocked down then you get up again with a little more life experience, don't let anything or anyone ever keep you down

    ♥


  • Lexie
    September 7

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    oh my. this is a greta poem. i love the picture, the story the emotions, all of it. the very first stanza was very eye catching and made my jaw drop. the ending was very nice. it made a nice happy, better ending. it told a story. one that started as somebody showing their love, got there heart broke, shut their self out of the world, then grew into a stronger, more confident person.

    But I'm not the same anymore
    dreams of you dont haunt me
    cos' I'm not the same anymore
    even if you can't see

    I travelled a distance
    to find myself
    or who I used to be
    instead I found, hidden in the dark
    a brand new me

    love is always confusing, and we go through a lot of heart break in our lifes. we just have to learn how to pick up our self and start over. great great poem.


    • CanadianGirl1
      September 8
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      Thank You so much for your wonderful words!! and you've gotten the story almost dead on! I appreciate your comment so much and I'm happy to hear *read* you like it
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