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[ Laughing insanely, ]

Laughing insanely,
Crying meekly.
Smiling falsly,
Frowning judgemently.
Spitting disgustingly,
Hitting angerly.
Sleeping peacefully,
Awaking spitefully.

Looking towards the sky I wish it were cloudy,
Looking towards the sky I wish it were sunny.
Looking for a silver lining,
Looking for a stormy centering.

I hate the cloudless days for they show no turmoil.
I hate the gray skys for they show no hope.
I love the scattered clouds for they balance thoughts,
I love the rolling fog for it holds it mysteries.
I hope I die quick,
I hope I live long.
I wish for knowledge to avoid disasters,
I wish for ignorence when they happen.

My bitter tears are shed rarely,
For they are not needed oftenly.
While people throw their morals and honor to the ground,
I humbly grasp my manners and respects to the crowd.
Weep for the living,
Smile for the dead.

I don't care just as long as the vulgar level is kept to a minimum. Any one can use vulgar words, lets be adult about our opinions here.

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  • AnjilMagik
    September 10

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    Wow. THis poem is awesome. You start off with blatent opposites, but then you gain more depth as the stanza's get longer. There are so many pairs that i enjoyed, but my favorite has to be the last, "weep for the living, smile for the dead" thats a stand that not many people would take, but holds so much power and truth to it. I like that you took a chance with this poem and stepped outside the box. Well done.