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Not ready for it to go....

I already wrote your name on my arm
thinking you would be with me forever
but it turns out the only thing i have left
of you is written on my wrist

You and me are done over
i never thought we would end
i dont regret nothing but
placing that blade on my
skin and cutting your name

Now all i want to do is pick
that same razor up and
crossing you right out of
my flesh heart and soul

Erasing all the memories
drying up all the tears
and moving on with my life

But it still remains
rite there where it has always been
waiting for the day i make it disappear

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  • Softball Prep22
    November 18
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    This is true guys don't realizewe blaim ourselves for what they do!!

    • DeSiBoO14
      November 18
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      iNo HuH!!dAmN..dUdEs KaN b SoO dUmB!!HAhA!!
      ThAnKz 4Da CoMMeNt!!

  • XXCrimsonRaineXX
    October 15

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    I like it...a lot. I can kind of relate to it. When my mom made me stop seeing the guy I was with I carved his name into my arm.


  • A dEaD dReAm
    October 5

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    my man broke up with me but now i guess were ok i meen were not together but were still kissing and touchin and shit like that

    • DeSiBoO14
      October 6
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      o WeLL iF uR hAppY wItH dAt DeN i Am 2!!...GuRl U gOt u A fRiEnD wIt BeNiFiTs...OoOo!!!HaHa!!

  • A dEaD dReAm
    October 3
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    aww i love you... i really need to talk to you..
    im so depressed right now its not even funny

  • A dEaD dReAm
    September 30
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    and mucha amor...
    i love you soo much sissy...
    i still your favorite sissy right??
    i dont want to be replaced and i thank you for keeping my ass alive and in check gurl without you i dont know what id do i love you

    • DeSiBoO14
      September 30
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      oF cOuRsE uR stIll My FaVoRiTe SiSSy!!aLwAyS n 4EvEr!!

  • SilverWolf
    September 16
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    awww sis that is sad

    love you

  • Lislaine
    September 15
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    wow!! Tis is sooooooo true!!!
    I loved it!!!!!!!!! sooooo much

  • Destiny-09
    September 14

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    TRUUUUUUUUUUE

    OH MY GOD! THAT WAS SO GOOD. IVE DONE THAT BUT IT WAS ON MY LEG,, AND THEN TWO MONTHS LATER, WE BROKE UP. AND NOW I REGRET IT. IT S KINDA GONE AWAY THOUGH.
    PS HOW FO YOU PUT YOUE PICTURE ON THERE. J/W

    • DeSiBoO14
      September 14
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      InO mInE kInDa WeNt AwAy 2!!
      O 4Ur PiC u JuS gO 2 mY aCCoUnT dEn U sCrOLL aLL
      Da WaY dWn TiL u C pErSoNaL iNfOrMaTiOn
      DeN cLiCk On Da ThInG dAt Say EdIt YoUr FaCe ImAgE
      dEn PuT uR pIc DeR!!

  • morgan2285
    September 14

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    OMG I LOVE IT...it almost made me cry... i also live the "but it turns out the only thing i have left of you si written on my wrist" line is AMAZING...but good job!
  • poetic-tragedy
    September 10

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    very deep!

    the first stanza makes me so jealous,i wish i wrote it lol.i give you tons of credit though.i love the part "but it turns out the only thing i have left
    of you is written on my wrist" i think thats really deep,i loved the whole poem.

    great job


    • DeSiBoO14
      September 11
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      hAhA..tHaNkZ soO mUcH 4dA cOmmEnT!!iM gLaD u LuVd It!!

  • A dEaD dReAm
    September 8
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    love it sissy... your uhmazing

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