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loves power

you can drag everything out
to last particle
but not love
even a single dot.

love fills
it becomes being
as air of atmosphere,
we are blinded 'some say'
miss reality 'others say'.

what ever it is
love prevails,
places gold around neck
we love so much.


power of love drives away everything
we are helpless before it,
however reasoned our logic is!

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  • vanessa reen gold member
    September 8

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    This is such a deep write with so much words of wisdom. I really enjoyed the last stanza, it was so powerful. Well done my friend.


  • maralisa gold member
    September 8

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    wow a beautiful poem thank you dad