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Amera the witch

The mistress of the dark and evil tale
Has spun a web to draw the  reader in
With poetry that surely cannot fail
You show the world the consequence of sin

While mystery encloses all your soul
And darkness your companion out of choice
A terror in your audience the goal
Then necessary outcome of your voice

You'd think you were an ancient twisted crone
Who strives to drag the good to evil ends
Condemned to live a dreadful life alone
Not garlanded with many cheerful friends

The Queen of all that's dark in poetry
The beauty who has set the terror free

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 9

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    Indeeed
    a great pastime.

    Name calling isnt becoming.

    But I shall scope this out for if she is yet called a Queen again it must be for good reason..

    I shall cower to my corner...

    for I have been invaded and sure dont need the curse..i have one.


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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 9
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    Indeeed
    a great pastime.

    Name calling isnt becoming.

    But I shall scope this out for if she is yet called a Queen again it must be for good reason..

    I shall cower to my corner...

    for I have been inaded and sure dont need the curse..i have one.


    Passions


  • And Hyetal gold member
    September 8

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    hmm, I randomly found this and, since I know Amera, had to read.

    This was beautifully written with a bit of darkness and humor. I loved the rhyme. This whole piece was perfect for her.

    I stand in awe of your poetic abilities.

    ~Cassie

  • jadeangyal
    September 8
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    I think I'll go read some of Amera's poetry.

  • Thomas Scott gold member
    September 8
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    Behold the wordsmith!
    Good stuff.


  • Allan Emery silver member
    September 8

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    I cannot deny the accuracy of this poem. She does indeed write them very well. Good job.


  • Amera gold member
    September 8

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    I read what you have printed here
    I’ll have you cower in your fear
    This curse I cast upon your soul
    So in your speech you lose control
    From now until forever more
    Your poetry shall be a bore
    I cast this spell upon your verse
    An English accent is the curse
    This curse shall last for all of time
    You now shall write with British rhyme

    Love,
    Amera the Witch♥


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    September 8

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    There's only one ancient twisted crone around here, and they don't come any twisteder!

    Bunnies!


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 8

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    I have never thought of Amera as a witch, but she does write some really good 'dark' poetry ... and so do you.

    This is excellent

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