Curving
Thru
Life
I
Wend
My
Way
Towards
Close
Of
Day
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Written at Volunteer Park, 7/24/2007
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This gives me a walk down a hillside, content and at one with my surroundings. Nice.
The form seems to echo the walk. I don't like 'thru' and I'm not keen on caps at the start of each line.
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Thanks for your comments; compliments, suggestions and applause. I do appreciate them.
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i love when poems are gorgeous and simple....well written...very envious...scars.
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Wonderful
Oh yes the reality of the planes of life. Just living through the day,
I Wend My Way
Loved that part. Thank you for sharing with me your gift to write poetry. You said so much in so few words. I like the format as well for this poem.
Wishing Many Blessings
Kelle Marie
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Thank you for your kind comments; compliments and applause. I do appreciate them.
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makin progress!
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This is another fine poem of contentment. I like it alot. It makes me feel relaxed and makes me smile.
Mike
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Well describes the walk along the pathway of life. Thank you. f
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