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Author notes
Decomposed by paperparadox 
To make a Dadaist Poem:
* Take a newspaper.
* Take a pair of scissors.
* Choose an article as long as you are planning to make your poem.
* Cut out the article.
* Then cut out each of the words that make up this article and put them in a bag.
* Shake it gently.
* Then take out the scraps one after the other in the order in which they left the bag.
* Copy conscientiously.
* The poem will be like you.
* And here you are a writer, infinitely original and endowed with a sensibility that is charming though beyond the understanding of the vulgar.
-Tristan Tzara
A contest entry
- Playing with your language - ROUND 2 - Dada by Kyo-N.
525 points, ended September 29, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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HAhA! Happy felicitations for acquiring the Gilded Goblet of Greatness on this grand guttural gallop! (Love those fangs, btw!!!)
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Clever
Love the way you penned your words in a venomous way and I am glad you did not chose Poison
Well done on the gold
Best wishes
Julie
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Wow This Is So Cool
I love the shape of this poetry, because I like snake and love dragons, and the writing it tells of poision in someones life or a snake bite this is totaly diffrent and so cool.
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Tristan Tzara would surely smile!!!
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This is very well written you def deserved the gold trophy!! You did a very lovely job with this piece!! I love the way in which you wrote it!! Fabulous details and descriptions!! This is truly amazing!! You gave a wonderful portrayal!! I love it!
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I have never seen anything like this before, and to be honest I was a little confused. However reading your notes and other's comments I can see it a little more clearly.
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It looks like ...
It is! A death adder lying in the dust. Sorry!
lying
it is!
A death adder
in the
dust
Congratulations, Lou
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I wonder if Tristan Tzara himself wondered about the real limits of what his creation was... seriously, this is wonderful. Sorry for the late judging.
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You are SO inventive!
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This is a fascinating creation. Admit I was a little confused until I read the requirements, which made it clear as mud. A snaking great write Well done and good luck in the contest!
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