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on my way to school

desperate silhouettes
on an outworn picnic bench
in front of a purple sky
dirty tears in their eyes

morning backdrop
posh coffee shop
where the men and women
in their suits
smoke cigarettes
before they go
where they go

wednesday paper
sports section
disconnection
afraid of my own reflection
in the window

stop requested
flat chested
girl with no brain
listening to t-pain
holes in her veins
a goddamn shame

my eyes look glazed
again today
and I understand
now firsthand
that beautiful moments
are unplanned

easy cheese
and pregnancy
cigarettes are good
for the baby

ear-buds in
june on the west coast
reminds me of
too many ghosts

stop requested
a well rested
mcdonalds employee
who hates
everything

avoid eye contact
too high to react
bury my nose
into breakfast at tiffany's

stop requested
walk off
get lung cancer
with my closest friends




Author notes

june on the west coast = song by bright eyes
breakfast at tiffany's = novel by truman capote


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  • InOurHands
    November 26
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    Oh my freaking hell. This is incredible.

    I was just breeding some cancer of my own in my lungs earlier tonight. It feels good, doesn't it?

    I am adding you as a favorite. Because you're too good to not keep up with.


  • February Angel
    September 11

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    Godd piece of work

    It really gave me a picture of the whole thing.Well written,definitely got rhyme and message.I enjoyed reading it.