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Fifty

Just half a hundred years ago
I set my parent's life aglow
Now I am what they've got to show
A poet who's a pain to know!

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  • Amrantiad gold member
    September 13
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    CONGRATS.have you reached the big 50 jeff.oh your not a pain..good luck in the contest..xxx


  • moonbumps silver member
    September 12

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    Not at all babes-pain never!!! Helpful constructive critic!!!!!
    Bumpy xxx


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    September 12
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    Yep - you nailed that!

  • judyjudyjudy
    September 11
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    Love it! I sometimes wonder if that's how my family feel!

    Thank you for your entry.

  • Sylvyrwyng silver member
    September 11

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    I don't know about the pain to know stuff but you are a poet that they are proud to love. You are something pretty special when it comes right down to it.

    I love the piece and am looking forward to knowing you for the next fifty years! Hugs
    chryssa


  • Amera gold member
    September 11

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    hehe... You're not a pain to know. I was raised to respect old people.

    Love,
    Amera♥

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