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friday nights

I'm such a lightweight
and here I am
kyle's parking lot
watching, hoping
scanning for a white car
any two-door
white sedan.
but every two-door
white sedan
isn't her's
and I don't know why
I'm such a goddamn wreck.

things like this
always happen to me.
it's two in the morning
and the moon
is reflecting off the river
and I'm high
so the lights
on the water
are dancing
and they remind me of something
that I don't want to remember
that I never want to remember
ever again.

I hope
what we have
will last.


I hope
you're not
a liar.

your lips
always touch mine
so softly,
and I know
you really mean
what you say.
I just always

have to complicate

things.

I don't know why
I get so sad
when you're not around.

I don't know why

I've invested so much

into the idea of you.

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  • InOurHands
    November 26
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    Where has this poem been my whole life???

    You're fucking phenomenal. I love this. So. Much.


  • scatterbrained
    November 9

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    woah

    it will surely become repetitive one day, how much i love your poetry, and how often i say it when commenting. i can relate so well, three cheers.


  • rise with the smoke
    September 13
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    wow i can relate to this so fucking much. this is like the story of my life. awesome writing.


    • Beata
      September 13
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      thank you
      that story of my life, too

  • turtletacular
    September 13
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    im not sure what to make of this poem, but it really is powerful.
    =)

  • Jo03
    September 13

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    It's because you've found love. When you can't keep your mind off someone, and you wonder what they're doing every single moment of the day, even if you think they're doing something unloyal to you deep inside you KNOW that They still love you and wouldn't do that to you. I mean I'm just takin a stab in the dark here but I'm just sayin, Love will make people do... lots of different things
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