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AJ Morelli

There was a time
When I thought Poetry was only pretty rhymes
Laid out in rhythm like misplaced music notes
When it was something either sad
Or happy
Poetry was simplistic
Easy to understand

There was a time before I knew you

When my words were stunted
Forced and broken
A misunderstood jigsaw puzzle
Made entirely of halted words and bad metaphors

There was a time before I knew you

Before I knew the value of words
before I appreciated how a simple sentence
Could put the entire day in a new perspective
Before I was touched so deeply
That I cried for someone I never knew
Who's story was not my own

There was a time

When just seeing a new title under your name
Made me smile
In fact it was yesterday
And as always I read the poem three times
First fast
And then slow
Then yet again out loud
Losing myself in your words
Closing my eyes and seeing it
Feeling the emotional blows

And wanting nothing more than to reach out and touch you
Like you have always touched me
Because you always have
Whether it was the gentle caress of sensuality
Or the harsh brush with true reality
A tickle to make me laugh
Or embrace that accompanies the tears

There was a time before I knew you
When words were only words

Author notes

My own Tribute to one of my all time favorite poets.

A contest entry

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    October 5

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    Ashley this was wonderful and I was so glad to see you entered this contest, it means a lot to me


    al

    • mantis180
      October 5
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      Well when I have the opportunity to sing you praises, do you think I would pass it up? I love your poetry, and you've touched me, I was glad you be able to show you.

  • Cat gold member
    October 4

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    i am so touched for al, by you-
    this is such a loving, wonderful tribute
    - wonderful

    m


  • Luna Tique Fringe gold member
    September 17

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    i love the unbridled admiration in your words, the vulnerablity. it makes feel like hugging you


  • Suzanne Dia gold member
    September 15

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    I cried last night
    reading his poetry
    i laughed, too
    and I smiled
    and sometimes I sighed

    sometimes i just reflected

    mostly i was in awe of him
    the way he shows himself
    he doesn't hide, he offers all
    vulnerable and exposed

    and i fell in love with his poetry
    as it would appear you have.

    this is wonderful.




    • mantis180
      September 15
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      In all honesty, I have been secretly in love with AJ and not so secretly in love with his poetry- for more than a year I believe. He is, above all things, open and honest in his poems. He carries humor and wit, and he plays on emotions like a musician would a violin. Everything about him is beautiful, and he is definitely something to be admired. I'm very glad you liked my poem, and even more so that you see what an amazing poet he is.
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