autumn girl ran free
from the forest with laughter
changed hands in the wind
In a list
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXV - by Bear by Arkbear.
450 points, ended September 16, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Autumn Haiku 5-7-5 by Piccola.
600 points, ended September 29, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Take My Breath Away(Anything you Want) by Felt-tipped-Poison.
675 points, ended October 19, 130 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Fall Harvest/ Fall Celebrations by Little Blue Bird.
1000 points, ended November 1, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short poems about the Autumn Season by The Fun House.
950 points, ended November 2, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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excellent~
It may be short
But 3 lines can say so much
This poem certainly has....
Best of luck in the contest...
It's a winner in my book
Hugs
Susan~~~
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haha! This is a brilliant little piece of poetry that you've done here. It's has sass and elegance. I like that. Well done
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That s cool
Thank you for the nice comment. Kendhal22
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- NOTHING THAT HAS PREVIOUSLY BEEN ENTERED A BILLION TIMES IN ANOTHER CONTEST OR HAS WON HIGHER THAN BRONZE. -
I envy anyone who can write a Haiku, I do not have the kind of grip on mesure.
This is a wonderful description of changing seasons (I think that's what it is). Very light hearted and well writen. Keep writing.
Phoenix
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Thank you
I want to thank you for the wonderful sentiments given to my poem, and this is right thinking of changing the hands of one season into another in a light hearted way. I can say this one of my fav.'s. I'm glad you liked. Kendhal22
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Nice
Thank you for entering the contest and good luck.
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Thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment given. Kendhal22
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ty for entering good luck
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Thank you
Thank you for commenting. Kendhal22
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Beautiful Haiku
Hmmm I love the movement...and the laughter. they all fuse together very well
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I love it...Adorable
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Beautiful!!!
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thank you
Thank you for the comment. Kendhal22
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Hi, a very nice Haiku, kind regards Di
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Thank u
Thank you for the wonderful comments given to my ku. Also like the applaudes given. Kendhal22
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Oh gosh....the last few of you Poets are making this very hard to decide on top 3....Grrr ~
This is the most unique by far.....the imagery took me right there and watched you running......and not knowing with whom, made this the more intriguing.....thank you for entering....God bless,
Bear ~
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thank u
Thank you Bear, this came to me and that I wouldn't get in time. I want to thank you for holding these wonderful contest. I'm glad you liked my ku. Kendhal22
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I love the changing of the seasons, and you painted a beautiful picture with so few words. A sign of great talent! Good luck in the contest!
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Thank u
Thank you for the wonderful response to my ku. I'm glad you liked it. Kendhal22
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Such a pleasant image you paint, with dancing colours. This autumn of yours seems a blessing, and as beautiful as the words you used to portray her. That last line was pure genius.
. Rewarded 4
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thank u
Thank you for the wonderful comments given to my ku. I'm glad you liked the last line. To me Autumn is favorite season of the year with the beautiful colors it represent. Kendhal22
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Very sweet. :] I love autumn the most and this paints a lovely picture.
Very nice :]
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Thank u
Thank u for the wonderful comment given. Kendhal22
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short, to the point, but very good and full of hope and laughter,
hugs,
georgie,
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thank u
Thank u for the wonderful comments given to my ku. To me Autumn is so full of hope and laughter bring changes each year. Kendhal22
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I like your perspective of fall. I agree with Haiku-bless-you, the personification does give the poem character
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thank u
Thank u for the wonderful sentiment given to my ku. To me Autmn is personified of a girl ever changing. The hands are the leaves given a change running through the forest laughing.
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Uniquely written perspective of fall, the personification give this poem much character, and makes it a pleasure to read. Well done!
Dennis
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thank u
Thank u for the wonderful comment given to my ku. This means a lot to me for given such high praises. Kendhal22
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