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Heart Wishes

Echoing with painful tears
I see life pass by
Whispers of deceits
Heart drops 21 stories

Sitting on the cold grounds
On a night to remember
Foolish games of memories seeking
Keepsake gift from the past
For now it’s that time
Present can’t find way to the future
Feelings are tangled in knots

Night brings drunkard misery
From the shadows beneath
Unforgiving moment in life unveils
Rising above the oceans of darkness
Ears hear the tick-tock, tick-tock from clock
Eyes wander to see around
To reveal the answer now

Guide me winds to the world
From behind gray clouds
Smiles back at me
A glimpse of heaven hidden on this earth
Simply because God’s truth doesn’t shift like the wind

Through the cool warm mist
Mind takes a walk on the prairies
Little longer it wishes to stay

What can I say
But hope lingers on
Of finding love again

Sun shines through clouds
… Heart wishes
To hear, I love you

Author notes

My first attempt on Cento form of poem - inspired by a great poet and my friend - sunshinegirl (Nyetta). thanks girl for inspiration - its not as good as yours, but hey I tried at least.) Following is the order of lines from my poems.

(line 6 from Buried under ripples)
(line 1 of Empty Hands)
(line 5 of Dark Lips)
(line 2 of Story is Written)

(line 1 of Lovestory)
(line 24 of Perfect Romance)
(line 4 of Confessions of a Heart)
(line 9 of Words spoken)
(line 26 of Falsk Story)
(line 12 of SVU Cop)
(line 12 of Flip Side of Story)

(line 2 of I’m Sorry)
(line 6 of Bloody Mary)
(line 2 of Sweet Poison)
(line 2 of A must of Sacrifice)
(line 19 of Welcome to My World of Sanity)
(line 14 of Forget Me Not)
(line 14 of Crystal Ball)

(line 1 of Gift of Freedom)
(line 10 of I’m here just for you)
(line 4 of Mannequin)
(line 15 of Glimpse of Heaven)
(line 21 of God’s Truth Doesn’t Shift Like Winds)

(line 3 of Autumn Tail of Mix)
(line 3 of Beautiful Confinement)
(line 3 of Fate)

(title of poem)
(line 9 of Play Back)
(line 32 of Standing in the Middle)

(line 28 of Taste of Life)
(line 3 of Dream)
(line 23 of Love is Not Perfect)

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Comments


  • Disturbed Prodigy gold member
    September 17

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    I don't know what cento is but i know you are one of the best with this poem keep it flowing, my friend


  • sunshinegirl silver member
    September 16

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    Well, what have we here? Another wonderful and fantastic read! That is what we have! You did a great job on this one! I love it! And well since there are a few here that have called me the Cento Queen, I guess I have the right to say, that for the first attempt, You did a lot better than my first one! And this is just stunning! Keep it up, and you will give me a run for my money on this form!

    Great job my friend!

    and love

    Nyetta