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hate me

in the darkness of the night
i was lost
i needed you there but you were gone
where were you?
i was always there for you
but when it comes to me...
your never there
do you hate me that much?

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  • very nice

    very cool i like it

  • sOuL
    September 27
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    Usually i am very coosy and conservative about giving applause, as far as i can remember i didnt give many applause and giving 3 applause together has only given a few times..
    you have the capability to write..y0ou are great poet and there are some reasonable similerities between yours and my poems..
    take care