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city song II

at the corner coffee house

young artists   with lofty ideals

construct conspiracies

over organic grounds



 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • Blkwidow77 silver member
    October 5

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    Short, sweet and humorous.

    Nearly words as a haiku, now doesn't it. I liked this. I could see these people, in sacramento or perhaps New york city. Some small shop, where you have to be careful of stepping on cockroaches.


  • sheltered
    September 19
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    an' I slowly become vegetables... lol


  • Suzanne Dia gold member
    September 18

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    I've done this a number of times in New Paltz, New York I love going to cafes with my notebooks and just sitting and writing out whatever is in my head. I now have 3 notebooks that I'm using, and sometimes post its and sometimes napkins and flyers, too but yes...

    great little snippet, I think.


  • evil tempest
    September 18
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    i like these songs