Poetic Angel

He is blessing and baptizing,

The path of life with each write,

His wonders are amazing,

His circles of knowledge-

Full and bright...

I like his silver moon,

The silence of his starry nights,

The Star Messengers, like flowers in bloom,

That hang about in little lights...

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photo credits by me

A contest entry

Random act of Kindness...spread the love on AP by LadyLavender. 675 points, ended September 21, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Annastacia
November 12
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Well done!!!
Beautifully written. Iespecially love the last 3 lines. Well done!!!
VedenKuuhenki
October 23

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Awesome
It's really well written and deep, I liked it a lot!
The poetry is not just a matter of words in it, but above all it's in the image you can give by words.
Claps!
moon2u
October 18

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The Star Messengers, like flowers in bloom,

That hang about in little lights...

star messengers I think are the tiny orbs we see
within the picture

this is lovely Jally congrats
hugs Moony
PrabhuDayal Khattar
October 2

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A great thought and image of the person..a great tribute as well..with right words..perfect emotions..and wonderful impact as well...
Angelo di Luce
September 25

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How inventful and talented you are dear poetess
to my surprise
Well done
myrataal
September 22

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How wondrous a poem ...
telling of the starry-eyed stargazer ... and the deep awe and silent excitement to be part of the divine Universe ...
Love your verses, Poetess.

Myra
LadyLavender
September 21
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Unique verses and each line evokes so much light.

Love it.

Thank you for entering
poeticweaver
September 19

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Such wonderful poetic praise
You're so sweet!

Much love, Timothy
Bob Fox
September 19

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Judy
Whomever she may be this piece tells much about her . And yet still more about the powr of your pen.