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shatterd

shatterd souls
broken hopes
whole worlds torn apart
all becuse of a broken heart
they tore the heart of the world
apart in anger & sadness
mabe even madness
i cannot handle all this pain
as i stand in the rain
i fall to the ground not
wondering why
why is this the way i die
as i hit the ground without a sound

i offer a plea to be set free
but my wretched soul wont let me be
i look up at the sky and wonder why god wont let me die
shadows dance on the ground
i her steps then many more then im picked up and halued away


many years later i look back on the day
the world fell apart a horrible tragady
but  as i walk this lonely road severd from time and space its all the old memories i cant erase
that are my companions

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  • seriouswheels731
    September 19

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    interesting

    the rhyming was a bit of cliche, i could almost predict it but you had good emphasis and message, for my memories are the companions of the painful memories we live through each so that we try to avoid them again.

    Please commment my poems thanks!!