Unchanging as the wind
and stronger as we go
the life of love we share
they only wish that they could know.
In sync, I'm a part of you
I finish the rest of your thought
in fairy tales I have heard
that this perfect love is sought.
To be such a part of you
I realize we're complete
where I end you start
and where you end, we meet.
Author notes
ahh my muse was semi-inspired...hope you enjoy...
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt - Quickie by poetryality.
600 points, ended September 20, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
honesty please...
Comments
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Lovely! I enjoyed this - love the complete 'connectiveness' thoughts in this.
Beautiful border, too!
best wishes in your contest.
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thank you so much for your kind comment my sister..
you are such a blessing..
namaste..
r
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Wow, this is great and so sweet.
It's true that love is like an
endless circle. Amazing thought
for this contest and good luck
to you with it here!
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Jeremy..
thank you so much for your kind comment..
blessings..
namaste..
r
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Sis this is so magical and beautiful!!! I love the feeling of continuation of love and consciousness your gave this verse. Very lovely my sweet Sister!!!
Az
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thank you my dear..
blessed be..
r
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Oh My, This is truly very lovely.
So softly worded, yet with a strong meaning.
Beautiful job, good luck.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Joyce..
thank you so much for your kind comment..it is always nice when a fellow writer stops to comment..
blessings..
namaste..
r
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I thoroughly enjoyed the rhyme, rhythm, and sencerity of these words. Your muse seems quite intact to me. LOL Beautiful! I love the border as well. Thank you for this entry, and I wish you the best in the challenge.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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