Carressed by knowledge, that you'll always be close,
there to protect me from my foes.
My love for you is always strong,
you've passionately commited yourself even when I've wronged.
What would I do without you here,
by my side throughout the years.
Author notes
Looks like a rhyming poem but not lol
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This sounds like the way a brother should be and if this is a picture of your brother, he looks like a really nice guy! duana
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this was a great poem
wonderfully penned -
Lovely
Very good write here and yes we are all in for more than most realize . I pray for our soldiers today for I fear for their well being so far away and am so worried more about them than us here at home . It was a disgrace they weent allowed to vote in this election for if anyone should have the right its them the strongest of this nation who puts their life on the line every day and night yet this election they had no voice
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excellent~
This is excellent sis
I wish I had a brother or sister either one.........
Very emotive
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
Got up 2 new ones drop by when ya can
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Not bad!
What would we do without our brothers....good questions Cara! This is a good tribute to your brother in my opinion. Thanks for expressing yourself in this!!!
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For such a short poem. It's the most delightful I've read in a minute. Cheers.
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Just beautiful!
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I really enjoyed this Cara and your word usage is growing Thank you for sharing your inner most feelings with us
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This is as always a truly great poem from a great poet, blessings John
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Now I think he's lucky to have you as a Sis.
Joe
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very nice young niece.. it's good to feel love in the family x good luck
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passionate, I love your love for your brother, emotional..good luck in he contest, dear sister
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AWWW cara you have a wonderful brother
good luck in the contest xxx
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