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What Will See Me Through


So many say that I am damned,
that questioning is evil too!
For I won't reach the promised land?
Unless their faith will see me through?

But I don't hold that hypocrites,
murderers for the gods of truth.
Should dictate at me:- So for this;
I hope my faith will see me through.

So heathen they may label me,
I'm damned.., for all the good I do.
My heaven will await for me
I know my faith will see me through

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 4

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    Very nice take on faith. Thank you so much for entering the contest, good luck.


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  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    September 24
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    Exactly! Great poem, questions, conviction and faith.


  • Mgreen
    September 21

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    The questioning and self confidence of the voice of this poem is great, I agree wholeheartedly with it as well. Faith will see you through.

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