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Changing tides

I can feel it, it's starting to happen again,
The inner voices are now controlling my pen.
The concept of time doesn't matter or even exist,
All that matters is this pen in my fist.
With it maybe I can release these demons from my soul,
I fucking hope so, I can no longer afford their toll.
They are tearing me apart, eating me alive,
On my misery, pain, and confusion they thrive.
They're screaming for booze, addiction, and pills,
Anything that renders me useless, anything that kills.
I need to be strong, ruthless and tough,
Gotta find a way to finally say enough is enough!
I think I can do it, I know I can,
They will never again defeat this man!

I'm going to win, the tide will turn!

I dont think so fuck-face, you're gonna burn.


Did You seriously think you could defeat Me?
You are the flower and I am the bee.
I'm smaller but I will always fucking win,
I've grown strong from your meat, making you sick and thin.
You have existed only so that I may live,
Now I no longer need what you have to give.
For so long I've controlled your heart and mind,
Then today a better vessel I managed to find.
Stronger now I'll enter my fresh, new host,
And start destroying another life of which to boast.
You are just worthless shit, waste from digested bread,
For years I've been killing you, now you're fucking dead!

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This probably only makes sense to me. Maybe I'm wrong. Who knows?

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  • AHHHHH JEB,
    you always make me so0o0o jealous with your writings for the way you pen em.. ugh lol but this is disturbingly beautiful write.
    sadistic and perfect like all of your pieces
    then it can be so related to its scary
    love you man like ive said
    keep penning like usual


  • Gabrielle28
    September 23

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    It does make sense to me. You displayed your two sides well. Your feellings are so strong I can feel them vibrate with every word. Please keep writing. It is our medicine for life.


  • Unforgotten
    September 22

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    angry

    well--bit of anger there--no? these writes are fantastic for the writer. without writing these we can't write anything else. at the same time--fuck--at the same time that anger doesn't always produce greatness. there are great parts from this...

    ok, my point is this is fantastic. i've got wild and angry pieces too--keep writing bro. you know i'm a fan.

    word.