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Con Artist Delirium

There was a sandslide
It happened in my mind.
It left life with no given shape or time.
Abstract in its art with a crooked con artist sign.
It left with a hint of a smile in the line.

Right, right?

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  • whits end silver member
    September 28
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    Bravo!!!!

    Right! Unique with a great flow. Except I want more, lol!