I lay in bed not able to sleep
To dream..
I can do nothing but think of you
I turn to see your face
As I lay in your arms
You looks so much like an angel
In the soft moonlight
I drink in your beauty...
As you look into my eyes
You tell me how much you love me
And then you kiss me ever so softly
All we do is lay here
For we can never sleep..
Never dream..
Never die..
We are bound together for eturnity
By a bond stronger than love
I am yours..
You are mine..
Forever...
Author notes
I've been reading the Twilight series and I just randomly thought of this poem..hope some one likes it!
Love,
~Kayla
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Comments
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i love it <3 its really great.
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awww great job! i love it!!! so cute
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This is beautiful! I love the line "I drink in your beauty..." This is something I could see edward saying/thinking. I did however see acouple of spelling errors. But great write! Thanks for sharing this with us!
♥
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Aww. That is really sweet. You're really good at imagery. I like reading your poems
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Beautiful peom. Not only would Bella be thinking this but Edward would be too. Sis, you have to read the whole series a couple times over. It gets better everytime I read it.
God Bless.
Matt.
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lol !
i have to read that seris for real!
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Breaking Dawn was amazing, I can so picture Bella feeling that way about Edward! I absolutely loved the Twilight Series. No wonder you liked my poem on one of the Edward and Bella moments!
Thumbs up!
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amazing
im like you, up to breaking dawn the second time through, love at first sight
beautiful poem, it has amazing insight into how much you can love someone. -
i luv this poem, i think some lines are amazingly done
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wow this was amazing, their lucky for no dreams, but they have to live forever, there duality int it its amazing!
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Thank you
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awe thats so amazing and pretty I love it.
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Thank you so much
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heh, you're reading the twilight books, i'm done with all of them. which one are you on and how do you like them?? i like this poem, keep writng.
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I have finished them and I am addicted to them! I am thinking about reading them again.lol
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