His tickling tongue had tasted every freckle
Her teasing fingertips had tickled too
No peeping Toms would find a cause to heckle
The two of them were finding things to do
The game had started with some bold unrobing
And they had raced to see who'd be the first
But now the time has come for urgent probing
It's clear the two of them are well rehearsed
Her knees are wide and like her grin they're spreading
And inbetween he's found a place to play
She's very keen on where his hopes are heading
And then she sighs he's found the place to stay
I think we better leave the pair exploring
Before they settle down to even more-ing!
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When I read this last night, I wondered what 'moring' was, but it was too late to make a comment and even later to find out what you meant, but I guessed it was just a spelling error.
This was fun to read
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Very clever, bro. Just nudges ahead of some of the more run-of-the-Greenian-mill. Awkward though it might seem, I would have liked to have seen "even-moreing", because that would have associated the last two words even more (
) closely with the phrase "even more"; as it stands, for a split second I found myself asking "What is moring, and how does one do it evenly?" Daft or what?
You're in a good frame of mind for poetry today. Bunnies without hesitation.
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You are right, I hesitated over how to write it, that's much better
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What's good on the ceiling?
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Hilarious.
Shades of Ogden Nash.
Just when it looked like you were going to do something else, here you are even moring.
Lucky us!
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