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A Naive Pain

She says she's sorry and that she's made a mistake,
I press the phone to my ear wondering how much more I can take.
She says that she's back with him, the one who started it all,
Who laughed when she cried and pushed when she would fall.
The pain spreads through my mind as the anger begins to burn,
She realizes her mistake as she hears how for his blood I yearn.
Now as I sit in my car, a pain cuts me like a knife,
Do I take care of him right now or support her through her life.
She mistakes my silence for anger and says she'll understand,
If this treason of her heart removes my friendship from her hand.
I tell her I'm sorry, I've overreacted, but I'll support her until the end,
As I think how to resolve this without hurting my friend.

How can you walk away from a friendship when you know the person will need you shortly.

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  • Desideria
    October 4

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    you cant and half the time the person who needs help cant either. ive done this alot but ive lost that friend to sit and help...i really enjoyed this poem the emotion came through i wouldnt change any part of this poem its great the way it is


  • Reckless.Emotions
    September 28
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    How very true. Don't you just want to kill the bastard? Good poem. Keep it up.


  • BeautifulMelancholy silver member
    September 28

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    powerful, I've been here before... unfortunately.
    "who laughed when she cried and pushed when she would fall"...

    but we cannot make choices for others. All we can do is love them,and pick them up when they fall.

    Thanks for sharing~
    all the best.

  • luna-midnight gold member
    September 27

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    awww, *hugs* this is such an emotional write, i hope things are better for her and you...
    take care, and keep up writting
    Stephanie ♥

  • allygirl87
    September 25

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    the way you use your words is amazing. very real.... i would say like you said lastnight, just try and support her, and pretend like hes not in the picture... much like she seems to do.... and you know where i am if you need anything <3

  • Pianokidd
    September 25

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    Wow..very very deep
    I tell her I'm sorry, I've overreacted, but I'll support her until the end,
    As I think how to resolve this without hurting my friend.

    Its obvious that put others before yourself

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