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Vindication of Lover's Rights

The last time we ran,
We ran away...
But now we hold hands,
And we run together,
In this pouring weather.

Say goodbye,
I can hear it.
Say goodbye,
and we will fear it.

Say goodbye,
We must be leaving,
Say goodbye,
Our truth is deceiving.

All you need to do is hold your breath and run.


Say goodbye,
My mouth can taste,
Say goodbye,
Before death has graced.

All you need to do is hold your breath and run.

No more holding your hands at skelaton's waist.
You are never going to feel again.
No more singing as you embraced.
You are never going to know when.

Say goodbye,
I can hear it,
Say goodbye,
and we will fear it.

Say goodbye,
We must be leaving
Say goodbye,
Our truth is decieving.

All you need to do is hold your breath and run.

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  • Nat
    September 27

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    The repetition is used better than my attempts..........making me feel less depressed rite now...........i love the second to last stanza as the tension slowly but sharply drops...and then the last sentence.........