The very definition of beauty
She spins out of control
Mesmerizing those around her entirely
Without ever saying one word
She is my beautiful disaster
And I love her so
Author notes
I hope this is what you want!!! It's a little dark....
A contest entry
- 30 Words Of Love. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended September 29, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congrats on the bronze my lovely one!
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A beautiful poem, congratulations on your trophy. sj
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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well done. i love to hear other opinions of those of who they love. that sounds like a secret thought of your love. its beautiful.
again
well done.
and good luck
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Thank u so much!!
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This is great hon and you did it in thirty!!!!
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Thanks boo!!
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wow, nicely done.
Such an in-depth story with only 30 words.
Lovely work
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Thanks so much!!
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l.o.l.
A little is right whoa! very scary! mommy! l.o.l. no excellent write! 4 real..
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Thank u!! I felt a little out of my element on this...I wanted to try something new..
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Whoa....that is magnificent....
an October surprise...
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Thank u!!!
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