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Hate Takes Alot of Love

i kneel to the floor
tears falling from my eyes
i have learned to hate you
along with all your lies
then why do i still love you
why am i still here
when you have broken me
and i still not shed a tear
people say its  plain to see
others say its clear
that if i just run-away
you would just disapear
but nothing was ever simple
there is nothing clear to see
i could never run-away
from something that was so dear to me
i love you but i hate you
without you i would be dead
and you would be the death of me
with all the things you have said
i know this wont make any sence
you might not understand
please just never leave me
i hope youll understand

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  • XxBlackenedEyesXx
    September 28
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    great write! it has a nice flow and rhyming
    loved it!

    • xXalyXx
      November 4
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      there is somrthing about it that doesnt seem rite
      everytime i read it i think i could change something
      well im glad u liked it
      thankyou!!!!