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Sweet Fragrance

 

still lingering
perceptible,
but only to me
the scent of our love
so new

being apart
even for
a moment,
tolerable for that trace
of you

sitting silent,
absorbing
the memory
of hands on my face,
on my breast

the perfume
of our love
still so sweet,
sooths me and gives
me rest

how long
will this
sweet fragrance linger?

when I wake
will it
be long gone?

leaving me
to mourn
and to wonder

when again
I'll be where
I belong

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Cannonsfire gold member
    November 7
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    So softly sad this one, sings it's own sad melody. C


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    November 5

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    A *sigh* poem.... just lovely.
    Well done to you Tony.
    Juls


  • JinSays gold member
    October 9

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    Ugh. there went me heart, right on the floor. Wow Tony. This is some amazingly insightful poetry, and I am impressed. Very sweet, poignant, and beautiful. Nicely done,
    love,
    jin


  • SnEeKiENINJA
    October 7
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    WoW!
    AMAZING


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 6

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    Beautiful
    I awe in the softness and gentle words that ripple though.
    Best wishes in the contest
    Julie


  • thegoldenpen
    October 6
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    Love it!

    This is a wonderful poem about your love! Good write!

  • Fireblaze
    October 6
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    Wow

    Beautiful


  • Ylova silver member
    October 6

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    Simply beautiful!

    I really do not know what else to say! This was very beautifully written. Good luck to you in the contest!!!

  • LaamRa
    October 5
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    This is one that speaks to the senses. Great job.
    Peace & Love.

  • PamelaP
    October 5
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    Beautifully written, Good luck in contest.


  • GreenHrtPaleMoon gold member
    October 2
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    Sweet. This has a tender and romantic feel. Best of luck with this.


  • princess Jewelcat22
    October 2

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    This is so sweet and romantic!!! You did a very beautiful job with this write!! I truly love it!! This is absolutely amazing!! I love your details and and descriptions!! You give great imagery!! I love it!!

  • HypnagogicState
    October 1
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    Love poems... Aw. I like it.
    *HS*

  • XXVampireeyesXX silver member
    September 30

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    aww so sweet and simple and beautiful. nicely penned this is very nice and very well expressed... good luck in the contest!


  • voodoo ink
    September 30

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    I love the sensuality of this one and the writer, knowing by scent, the one place where he belongs, to his love...very well written, poet...


  • first forgotten
    September 28

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    sometimes it feels like love is nothing but a dream; who knows if dreams come true or not. this is a great poem. i love the rythm, especially. the last four lines are my favorite. they show the side of hopefullness that we all want to believe in. good luck, love. :-*


  • Confusedboy gold member
    September 28

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    Wonderful. Scent of her remains in your nostrils, body and mind. dione with feeling.


  • Chaos Star
    September 28

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    It should be "soothes," not "sooths."
    But aside from that little point, this was very well written. I like the softness of it and the way it flows. Good write!

    • thepoetssoul gold member
      September 28
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      I think sooths fits just fine.
      And should it not be "written very well"
      rather than"very well written"

  • PerfectImperfection
    September 27

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    This is absolutely beautiful!!! A sweet sigh of embrace, cherishing the dreams of heart - and that moment grasped to linger. Excellent emotion, a very touching piece! Graet write!!!


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 27

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    Oooh. This is absolutely breath-taking. You did a fantastic job on emotion, and the background is stunning. Great flow. Congratulations on being Today's Poem!!
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 27

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    Very beautiful poem!! You have penned something so softly touching that I think many can relate to!


  • Todays Poem Box
    September 27

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    Absolutly a breathtaking sensation!
    lovely sensual poem.

    You have been nominated for a Poem Of the Day in
    The group Today's Poem

    Congtats.

  • Bob Fox
    September 27

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    Tony

    May you smell her fragrance for a thousand miles and never doubt her love. A tender, beautifull piece of poetry.

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