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Sunday on the recliner!!

There is nothing than can be finer
than a Sunday on the Recliner.


You can't beat the feeling when you relax
on a piece of great furniture right to the max!

Sunday afternoons on my recliner can't compare
just relaxing with my feet up into the air.

As you can see I am one person that is not a whiner
Because I prefer my Sunday afternoon on my recliner!!

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What I like to do on Sundays!!

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  • nookie31976 gold member
    November 28
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    I can just imagine how relaxed you are on Sundays Hey a cold beer and a football game I can't say that I blame you. This is a very funny and unique peice. Good Job!!!!

  • aboomer silver member
    November 28
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    lol - well I must say you look VERY COMFORTABLE and RELAXED!...lol


  • libithina
    October 12

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    That sure hits the spot with me Pat, budge up is there room for a little one, really cheering write *hugs Lib x x

  • Blue Rew gold member
    October 12

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    Paints just the right feel to Sundays!
    I like the rhyme and the "to the point"
    (but playfully) display of this write. Blue

  • Shamrockguy
    October 12
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    Amusing. Good rythm, good rhyme. The picture is perfect to


  • EternitysLastWish
    October 11
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    Hey Pat!
    This is great, do you know this is the best rhyme scheme I have seen from you so far. It really is, it flows so well and this piece also shows a good sense of diction.
    It is also witty and amusing, not to mention short and sweet, making it memorable

    well done Pat, I can see a lot of effort went into this!

    Jess


  • Scrunter gold member
    October 9

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    Lol...I love this piece of work by you. It says it all about sundays. well done on this one and thank you for sharing it.

  • luv2dream gold member
    October 1
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    great...gotta enjoy the simple things in life..just woke up from my couch and feel refreshed!

  • Rudolf
    September 29

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    its great

    great that your sitting, visiting thoughts
    poems soon to be writen, unraveling knots
    feet in the air, reclining prime time
    sundays are fair, deknoting in ryhme....

    rudolf


  • Amrantiad gold member
    September 29
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    Good for you Pat
    Mines a pint please cheers
    xxx


  • Wandika gold member
    September 29
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    Must be nice

    I wish I had the time.

    Jim


  • Tennessee-Joe
    September 29
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    Amen

    Pass the popcorn Pat.
    Great Sunday poem.
    Joe


  • daviscth silver member
    September 28

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    LOL. I have to agree with you Pat. Since gas prices shot up so much, this is what we do every weekend. We got a wonderful cozy sofa that reclines and we kick back, drink coffee and watch movies on weekends.


  • Emerald Dog
    September 28

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    Well Pat, I have to agree with you here - I have been doing just that pretty much all day - and it was marvellous! Well written my friend!


  • Loki
    September 28

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    Sundays are very often overlooked. They should be a day for relaxation and recharging for the upcoming work week, great write here Pat. Thanks.

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