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Mummy's heart.

I'm sad because Mummy is upset
so pave a line to her heart.

By Kiarna---nearly 8 years old.

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 8
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    Oh this is so sad, you have done a beautiful job of this poem Best to you in the contest

  • BowDownToTheQueen
    October 4
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    oh hun...this is beautiful! i love it!


  • cuteleah
    October 1
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    kiarna,I like it. I'm sad because mummy is upset, so pave a line to her heart.


  • LongPatrol
    September 29

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    Beautiful. I love it. And if you show your mom, I'm sure she'd love it too.
    Good write for one so young.
    -LongPatrol

  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 28

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    Oh Kiarna this is so sad, but beautiful. You always think of your mummy and I know how vwey much you love her
    gaylene

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