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Seeking Serenity Within Shadows

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The sun rises ~


my eyes open slowly

and I am thrust

into swift, sudden currents

of chaos


swirling

once more,

 

deep density

surrounding me


as surely

as a new day

has come.



I take a deep breath,

grab my bootstraps

and my courage,

  

trying to handle it

with as much tolerance

and patience

as I can muster


at the moment.



Too much, too soon, too often

causes me to fold unwillingly ~

inward origami,


jagged edges

and smooth valleys

covering my internal fields


of faith and folly.



It doesn't matter,

I tell myself,

but I am not listening ~



I am surging

towards these rocky shores

on wild waves

not of my own making ~


how does one persuade

the tide?






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Art credit: Ocean of Secrets by four eyes




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  • Sonja
    October 5

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    Somehow I feel you are searching for a new way to expose your feelings but I like it. It is refreshing as coming waves. Used metaphors are as always great.
    ~Sonja~


  • Dark Shadow
    September 30

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    beautiful and flowing as usual with a very good understanding of feeling that i myself can relate to in this piece... great job


  • Dantes Inferno
    September 30
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    Beautiful

  • cutiepie gold member
    September 30

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    I have often felt that life rides on the tides...being pulled by the moods of the moon and the heat of the sun evaporating ill feeling/ill health. I very much enjoy your softly spoken words( I am inclind to speak aloud ) as I find them to be theraputic..I also search for the many hidden secrets within the lines and you never fail to deliver Bravo my friend, one of your finest


  • Nicolette gold member
    September 29

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    This one touched me.. this is excellent poetry. The image of an "inward origami" will stay with me... simply loved it. You are stronger than the tide, you know that...and shines brighter than shadows..

    ~ Nicolette


  • Dalaney gold member
    September 28

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    eloquent, powerful, full of strength. i think you have written a stunning entry, and i truly was inspired.

    love, lane


  • Danna Hobart
    September 28

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    It has been too long since I have read your words, my friend. I found some treasures in here for sure.

    I take a deep breath,
    grab my bootstraps
    and my courage,

    inward origami,

    These lines in particular made me pause to contemplate their deeper meaning. One of your best poems, I think.
  • krizaa
    September 28

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    you could've so easily said " how does one turn the tide?" but you didn't. would've been a cliche. your ending is beautiful the whole poem is.


  • parenchma
    September 28
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    Inward origami. Classic.
    You have learned the serenity and strength in surrender.
  • Stormraven
    September 28

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    This one is special , I love the last line , How does one persuade the tide)I wish I knew ........Storm


  • marc creamore
    September 28

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    Wow Swan . . . this is different, but still most definitely you . . . I'm sure we have all felt the harsh reality of life crashing down on us, but you describe it so eloquently . . . Yet another masterwork from your oh so beautifully held pen . . .

    Marc

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