Bleeding down
a blood soaked arm,
because it feels
so much better when i harm.
When i cut
it feels so great
Only problem
when im in that state
Some how ill manage
to cut far to deep
And from my veins
my blood will creep
As i die i wont
shed a single tear
Because living's
my only fear.
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Breath-takeing!!!
omg!!! this poem is so wonderful!!! i loved it every word was great, it kept me in love with it all the way through it was wonderful!!! My favorite part was:
Bleeding down
a blood soaked arm,
because it feels
so much better when i harm.
When i cut
it feels so great
Only problem
when im in that state
Some how ill manage
to cut far to deep
And from my veins
my blood will creep
As i die i wont
shed a single tear
Because living's
my only fear.
Ok, yeah i know thst the whole thing, but i couldnt pick a favorite part, i just loved it all!!!
<3
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omg your so sweet. i cant believe you like it that much.
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aww no prob, its a really wonderful poem!!
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lol thanks=)
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wow
wow this is really good!!! i love it... keep it up
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wow thanks i really appreciate it. i usually get mocked for my writing not applauded
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i love it. its really deep and i understand wat ur sayin to
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thanks its seriously really appreciated wjhen people say stuff like this
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