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Life is a complicated world

Life has it's many twists and turns,
I've had my share of heartfelt burns,
I've had so many life changing ups and downs
some I have to say turned my life upside down.

I really wish I could get a break,
things for me just are always changing,
I mean what is it really gonna take,
There is so many little things they aren't even worth naming.

So i've shed my share of tears,
so i've been hurt,
who really cares,
that's my twist in life.

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lifes just rough....

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  • xrain dancerx
    September 29

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    life just sux. lolz. yeah im in one of those moods too...and this poem explains it. great jobs.
    *hugs* tessa.
    aka xrain dancerx


  • DarknessOfSanity
    September 29

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    WOW!

    this is your second poem, right? well, i absolutely loved it! it's really good! it's fantastically written, it has a spectacular flow, and the wording is just so...i'm speechless! haha it was really emotional, and easy to relate to. you have talent, babes! keep it up!


    • Zeek16
      September 29
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      heh yea, my poems r just few n far between, I just gotta be in the mood to write one lol. thx xD